مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : جمل فيها افكار جديدة


Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
26-01-2009, 11:50 PM
1- They aren't getting the same HW as they aren't in the same class( Unless
2-He had a car( got
3-He is swimming in the pool ( done
4-I consider his beliefs (believes
5- The meeting was successful(a

muhamaddawn
27-01-2009, 09:01 PM
5- The correct answer the meeting was a success.

muhamaddawn
27-01-2009, 09:14 PM
They are not getting the same HW unless they are in the same class.
He got a car before.
I consider what he believes.

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
27-01-2009, 09:27 PM
only the last sentence is correct

Sharp
27-01-2009, 09:41 PM
بجد افكار جديدة :huh:

MAZEN gamal
28-01-2009, 07:04 AM
1- They aren't getting the same HW as they aren't in the same class( Unless
2-He had a car( got
3-He is swimming in the pool ( done
4-I consider his beliefs (believes
5- The meeting was successful(a
1-Unless they were in the same classtheywouldget the samehw
2-he got a car

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
28-01-2009, 01:15 PM
sorry,brother Mazen your answers aren't correct

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
07-02-2009, 03:32 AM
Model answer 1- Unless they were in different classes, they would get the same HW
2-He Hasn't got a car now
3-Swimming is being done in the pool by him
4-I consider what he believes
5-The meeting was a success

نهال صلاح
07-02-2009, 08:49 PM
جملة جميلة لكن أرجو شرح للجملة الأولى

نهال صلاح
07-02-2009, 08:52 PM
نرجو مزيد مثل هذة الجملة الجديدة الفكر

ahmednegm68
07-02-2009, 09:06 PM
They aren't getting the same HW as they aren't in the same class
If they were in the same class,they would get the same hw.
Unless they weren't in the same class,they would get the same hw. x
Unless they were in different classes, they would get the same HW.

روح تسرى
07-02-2009, 09:44 PM
السلام عليكم


bagad very exellent

I hope more


I am sorry :(:(

I came late

rabie123
07-02-2009, 11:16 PM
مشكووووووووووووووورين على الافكار الجميله ديت لكن عندى جمله فكروا فيها
change into active
He was seen by the dead

Sharp
07-02-2009, 11:29 PM
(
2-He had a car( got
5- (a
طيب يامستر مش تنفع
He had got acar
:)

مستر/ عصام الجاويش
08-02-2009, 05:55 PM
Model answer 1- Unless they were in different classes, they would get the same HW
2-He Hasn't got a car now
3-Swimming is being done in the pool by him
4-I consider what he believes
5-The meeting was a success

جميل يا مستر بس اعتقد انك نسيت حاجه فى الجمله الرابعه وهى كلمه in فى اخر الجمله

مستر/ عصام الجاويش
08-02-2009, 05:58 PM
مشكووووووووووووووورين على الافكار الجميله ديت لكن عندى جمله فكروا فيها
change into active
He was seen by the dead
by the dead هنا معناها بجوار الموتى والاجابه هتكون

People saw him by the dead.

وممكن اى فاعل مناسب بدل people

egyptian_35
08-02-2009, 08:20 PM
1- They aren't getting the same HW as they aren't in the same class( Unless
2-He had a car( got
3-He is swimming in the pool ( done
4-I consider his beliefs (believes
5- The meeting was successful(aأسف هكتب بالعربي مع انني قادر علي الكتابه ب E الجمله الاولي ركيكه خطأ و ياريت حضرتك تقول مصدرها ....... وانا شور انها مش هي حته.........شكرا........i m waiting ur reply

الأستاذ عادل الحلاج
08-02-2009, 08:25 PM
لِلَّهِ مَا فِي السَّمَوَاتِ وَمَا فِي الْأَرْضِ وَإِنْ تُبْدُوا مَا فِي أَنْفُسِكُمْ أَوْ تُخْفُوهُ يُحَاسِبْكُمْ بِهِ اللَّهُ فَيَغْفِرُ لِمَنْ يَشَاءُ وَيُعَذِّبُ مَنْ يَشَاءُ وَاللَّهُ عَلَى كُلِّ شَيْءٍ قَدِيرٌ (284) آمَنَ الرَّسُولُ بِمَا أُنْزِلَ إِلَيْهِ مِنْ رَبِّهِ وَالْمُؤْمِنُونَ كُلٌّ آمَنَ بِاللَّهِ وَمَلَائِكَتِهِ وَكُتُبِهِ وَرُسُلِهِ لَا نُفَرِّقُ بَيْنَ أَحَدٍ مِنْ رُسُلِهِ وَقَالُوا سَمِعْنَا وَأَطَعْنَا غُفْرَانَكَ رَبَّنَا وَإِلَيْكَ الْمَصِيرُ (285) لَا يُكَلِّفُ اللَّهُ نَفْسًا إِلَّا وُسْعَهَا لَهَا مَا كَسَبَتْ وَعَلَيْهَا مَا اكْتَسَبَتْ رَبَّنَا لَا تُؤَاخِذْنَا إِنْ نَسِينَا أَوْ أَخْطَأْنَا رَبَّنَا وَلَا تَحْمِلْ عَلَيْنَا إِصْرًا كَمَا حَمَلْتَهُ عَلَى الَّذِينَ مِنْ قَبْلِنَا رَبَّنَا وَلَا تُحَمِّلْنَا مَا لَا طَاقَةَ لَنَا بِهِ وَاعْفُ عَنَّا وَاغْفِرْ لَنَا وَارْحَمْنَا أَنْتَ مَوْلَانَا فَانْصُرْنَا عَلَى الْقَوْمِ الْكَافِرِينَ (286)

الأستاذ عادل الحلاج
08-02-2009, 08:28 PM
قال تعالى ( لِلَّهِ مَا فِي السَّمَوَاتِ وَمَا فِي الْأَرْضِ وَإِنْ تُبْدُوا مَا فِي أَنْفُسِكُمْ أَوْ تُخْفُوهُ يُحَاسِبْكُمْ بِهِ اللَّهُ فَيَغْفِرُ لِمَنْ يَشَاءُ وَيُعَذِّبُ مَنْ يَشَاءُ وَاللَّهُ عَلَى كُلِّ شَيْءٍ قَدِيرٌ (284) آمَنَ الرَّسُولُ بِمَا أُنْزِلَ إِلَيْهِ مِنْ رَبِّهِ وَالْمُؤْمِنُونَ كُلٌّ آمَنَ بِاللَّهِ وَمَلَائِكَتِهِ وَكُتُبِهِ وَرُسُلِهِ لَا نُفَرِّقُ بَيْنَ أَحَدٍ مِنْ رُسُلِهِ وَقَالُوا سَمِعْنَا وَأَطَعْنَا غُفْرَانَكَ رَبَّنَا وَإِلَيْكَ الْمَصِيرُ (285) لَا يُكَلِّفُ اللَّهُ نَفْسًا إِلَّا وُسْعَهَا لَهَا مَا كَسَبَتْ وَعَلَيْهَا مَا اكْتَسَبَتْ رَبَّنَا لَا تُؤَاخِذْنَا إِنْ نَسِينَا أَوْ أَخْطَأْنَا رَبَّنَا وَلَا تَحْمِلْ عَلَيْنَا إِصْرًا كَمَا حَمَلْتَهُ عَلَى الَّذِينَ مِنْ قَبْلِنَا رَبَّنَا وَلَا تُحَمِّلْنَا مَا لَا طَاقَةَ لَنَا بِهِ وَاعْفُ عَنَّا وَاغْفِرْ لَنَا وَارْحَمْنَا أَنْتَ مَوْلَانَا فَانْصُرْنَا عَلَى الْقَوْمِ الْكَافِرِينَ (286)

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
12-02-2009, 08:27 AM
why do you think that the first sentence in not completely correct if you consider the sentence carefully you will find out that we are supposing the opposit of a present action so we used the 2nd case and to give the same meaning with a negative article we must change the word the same to the different I hope that my dear brother got my view point with my best regards Mr El Hegazy

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
12-02-2009, 08:32 AM
Thank You ,Mr Esam for your addition ,but I think the meaning is correct without( in) isn't that right

dahdash
12-02-2009, 03:18 PM
- Unless they were in the same class,the wouldn't get the same HW.لآن المضارع المنفى يساوى الحالة الثانية فى الأثبات
- He got a car.or He has got a car before.
- Swimming is being done in the pool.
- I consider what he believes.
- The meeting was a successful one. or I've never seen such a successful meeting.

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
12-02-2009, 06:36 PM
Dear colleague we must use the word different when we use( Unless )as the fact says they aren't in the same class and we can't get a negative verd after Unless so to give the same meaning we must say (Unless they were in different classes )I hope that I could get my point of view across to :slap1qk6:you Learning has no end

mr.ahmedabdelwahed
12-02-2009, 08:33 PM
zillion thanks

egyptian_35
13-02-2009, 12:08 PM
why do you think that the first sentence in not completely correct if you consider the sentence carefully you will find out that we are supposing the opposit of a present action so we used the 2nd case and to give the same meaning with a negative article we must change the word the same to the different I hope that my dear brother got my view point with my best regards Mr El Hegazy بص يا مستر 1- الجمله مصدرها ايه..............لو سمحت رد علي؟
2- استخدام get في ing في هذا السياق خطأفادح
ارجو الرد المباشر

**اية
13-02-2009, 01:34 PM
:078111rg3::078111rg3::078111rg3::078111rg3:اولا شكراا علي هذه الجمل 0000بس هسال كام سؤال
انا جربت احل ايه الخطا في الاجابات الاتية مع الشرح المفصل من فضلك
1) unless they were in same class . they were not get the same H W
5)it was a successful meeting
ارجو الرد السريع

egyptian_35
13-02-2009, 02:16 PM
لابد من وضعinبعد believe

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
13-02-2009, 02:17 PM
?!Dear colleague Egyptian-35 I don't know what's wrong with using getting in this respect doesn't it :slap1qk6:here mean take

egyptian_35
13-02-2009, 02:38 PM
اسف ردك دايما غير مقنع غير كافي لاحط وجود طلاب

egyptian_35
13-02-2009, 06:41 PM
اسف ردك دايما غير مقنع غير كافي لاحظ وجود طلاب


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لابد من وضعinبعد believe

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
14-02-2009, 12:17 AM
Dear colleague Egyptian 35 (Get )here means (take )what's wrong with that please tell me and I will change my mind at once
As You Sow ,So Will You Reap
What can't be cured must be endured

egyptian_35
14-02-2009, 12:34 AM
first
get doesnt mean take, we cant make that
second
why you didnt tell me this sentence source
third
why you didnt comment on believe or believe in
get= hear prepare understand catch hit confuse annoyreceive obtain move reach bring

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
15-02-2009, 12:01 AM
Get here means( take) so what's wrong with adding (ing

egyptian_35
15-02-2009, 07:18 PM
lyfirstly
get doesnt mean take, we cant make that
secondly
why you didnt tell me this sentence source
thirdly
why you didnt comment on believe or believe in

get= hear prepare understand catch hit confuse annoyreceive obtain move reach bring
مش عارف امتي هترد علي الاسئله دي

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
15-02-2009, 10:43 PM
Dear Brother Egyptian-35 I think it isn't wrong to translate or consider get as take or obtain they all give the same meaning in this respect as for your second question about the source of the sentences they are all of my own no source for them except me and if there is anything wrong with them I'd be glad if you correct them for me finally I think that believe in is the correct answer you can ask anyone of our distinguished teachers for example Mr Essam ,Mr Tarik,MrAhmad Fadel and here it is my mobile 0106593067 Mr Mosaad El Hegazy New Maadi Language School

egyptian_35
15-02-2009, 11:21 PM
شكرا يا مستر علي ردك المهذب و هذا ليس بجديد علي احد مدرسي english
1- مصدر الجمل ابداعك الشخصي و هذا يحسب لسيادتكم
2- نتفق ان believe in افضل من believe فقط
3- اقترح ان نستخدم dont get
و ليشترك معنا الاخوه المدريسين لان هذا يعتمد علي sense و شكرا علي الرد المهذب و لو انه جاء متاخرا علي فكره انا استخدم اللغه العربيه كي يستفيد تلاميذنا

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
16-02-2009, 06:56 AM
Dear Friend sorry for my late reply as I have some problems with my net connection and your opinion of using don't get is also completely right

Mr operation
16-02-2009, 10:24 AM
ممتاز يا مستر و نرجو المزيد من هذه النوعيه
وفقك الله و زادك من علمه

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
16-02-2009, 05:05 PM
Thank you May Allah Bless you
A Friend Indeed is a Friend in Need

primomido
16-02-2009, 07:37 PM
they realy good sentences i hope more

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
16-02-2009, 08:49 PM
You can read more of these sentences with model answers also by
Mr El Hegazy on this site entitled
"?Rewrite are you ready

**اية
18-02-2009, 01:48 AM
[quote=**اية;1093654]:078111rg3::078111rg3::078111rg3::078111rg3:اولا شكراا علي هذه الجمل 0000بس هسال كام سؤال
انا جربت احل ايه الخطا في الاجابات الاتية مع الشرح المفصل من فضلك
1) unless they were in same class . they were not get the same H W
5)it was a successful meeting
ارجو الرد السريع
انا سالت على هذه الاجابات لييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييه محدش جاوبنى

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
18-02-2009, 06:30 AM
As For The First Sentence listen carefully, Aya the sentence is present isn't that true? Well ,so we must use if 2 and to give the same meaning *if the sentence is affirmative present it must be past negative when we use if and vice versa
Hence, if we want to use if we must say
*If they were in the same class,they would get the same HW.
However, the question needs using Unless and it's impossible to put a negative verb after unless here so to give the same meaning we must change (the same into different
Unless they were in differnet classes ,they would
get the same HW
The Second sentence is completely right
The meeting was a success= It was a successful meeting
Best Regards from Mr El Hegazy
0106593067

**اية
18-02-2009, 09:34 PM
شكرااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااا اااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااا اا علي هذه الاجابات
ياريت يا مستر اسئلة اخري

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
18-02-2009, 10:25 PM
Never Mind,Aya you Will Find More of These Sentences and Their Answers Also By Mr El Hegazy Entitled Rewrite are you ready?

pescatore
19-02-2009, 06:02 PM
this old sentence Mr hegazy
fawzy with u

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
19-02-2009, 08:12 PM
Welcome Fawzy May Allah Bless You

mr_me
02-03-2009, 08:36 AM
please answer she is fond of the beautiful nature of the country Begin with The beautiful

abo zeyad
06-03-2009, 02:27 PM
انا قاعد بتفرج و بتعلم وعجبانى الشياكه فى النقاش الله ينور عليكم كلكم ولسه هنتعلم ان شاء الله منكم الكثير

Mr Mosaad El Hegazy
07-03-2009, 03:35 AM
The beautiful nature of the country fascinates her

Egyknight
24-03-2009, 06:30 AM
جمل تحمل فكر نرجو المزيد