السلام عليكم ورحمة الله

يا جمااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااعه

عندى اقتراح يا جماعه للى فى الثانوية بالذاااااااااااات

تيجى نتكلم فى الموضوع ده انجليزى

نتكلم فى اى موضوع وحتى لو اخترنا موضوع بسيط بجمل بسيطة

بس نعرف نتكلم انجليزى فى محادثات او غيره

ارجووووو تساعدونى

انا بحفظ كلمات كتير

بس بتطير منى

قولولى رأيكم وساعدونى

ok i agree with you
so what is your opinion about news of the day

Do you mean the news of Egypt nowadays?

or

my day today

Current news in Egypt

and i know your home which Mohamed Gedo was born right ?

I agree with you , too...

it is a great idea to improve our english

lets go every one should tell us about some thing (you will told us a big pharagraph)

انا سبدأ بعد اذنكم بموضوع عن مبارك و الاحداث الجاريه و ربنا يستر و اعذرنى اذا كان هناك اخطاء نحويه او املائيه و ارجو ان يصححها لى الاخرونmubark is a very smart man he treat with egyptians very carefully .in the first he build toushka project .then he buy it to forein pepole to get money . he keep peace and stole egypts money .he make it easy to watch hotbirds filmto make the yoth rude and not polit .this man is not imagine that the youth go to streets and say to him" get out egypt mubarak* ارجو ان اذكر كل من يقرا الموضوع من المسئولين ان هناك حريه للرأى و بلاش القبض عليا عشان عندى عيال بربيهم

In my opinion,the paragraph is very good.But I've some notes...
You should care of "THE CAPITAL LETTERS" on outset sentences...............
I hope you accept my opinion...............
و تقبل مرورى......

Thanks to all for accepting my suggestion

Ranmory your paragraph is very good

I hope I can write paragraphs like it

Current news in Egypt

and i know your home which Mohamed Gedo was born right ?


yes , of course

I know Geddo became famous after the African Cup of Nations

Do you know that Houch Issa has alot of footballers like geddo & Ehab Elmahs

What about the city where you born ?

thank you soosoo and dana and lets me tell you about the city where i was born i was born in nasr city in 30 august 1995 nasr city was uncrowdedcity i love it alot .becouse it was quite . i made many friends. and i still rememember them. but naw nasr city have pollution . and become a sheleter for thiefs

that's nice to still remember your old friends

I still far from my old friends 3 years (during prep school)

but now

we returned friends again

soosoo and dana do you like to write an important and difficult pharagraph about massanger mohamoud or massanger esa? . if you now a big information for any massnger you will write a phargraph about him , وتقبل مرورى

soosoo you are very good girl but i still remember my friends .although i did not see them for 2004 ! but they sometimes call me . naw i make new friends like my freind nadia . would you like to be my friend and e-mail me

i will write a pharagraph about masanger mohamed "he is the massanger of peace.he is mohamed abd el lla . .when he was born his mother died .his grand-father adapt him. when hisgrand-father died .his uncle adapt him . he worked as a shepherd. at the age of 20 he married khadiga .and he had many babies. he was modest honest and cherreful .at the age of 40 gebril went to him in haraa .he told him to read (soraekra) mohamed told (korish) to know allah by friendly way .and many peapole had been muslims .finally i like to say mohamoud get out pepole from the dark to the light . اريد ان اسأل هل التعبير الاخير اخرج الناس من الظلمات للنور بالانكليزيه هكذا صحيح ؟!

mohamoud get out pepole from the dark to the light


Mohammed enlightened the people of Egypt and gave them inspiration.

what do u think? http://www.g-ksa.net/vb/Picture/211.gif

oh! my god i had translated letterly .thank you i think your sentense is very good .would you like to share us in this site و صحيح هو اول تعبير انا كتبته فى هذه المشاركه صح ؟ و ترجمته هى " لقد ترجمت حرفيا"

soosoo you are very good girl but i still remember my friends .although i did not see them for 2004 ! but they sometimes call me . naw i make new friends like my freind nadia . would you like to be my friend and e-mail me


first:- thank you

I wish I will one of your friends if you are a girl

If you a girl send me your e-mail in a messege

thank you soosoo . i am a girl and my name is nada

droos i like to tell you a small mark in your sentens mohamed enlightend all the people not the egyptain only your sentence good in grammer but not good in fact and accpect my passing

عايزين يا جدعان نكتب موضوع عن تنحى الرئيس السو ده و الف مبورك على كل المنتديات و المنتديات اللى جنبنا

the god did not weast any afford. the people went to tahrer sqare to tell mubark that to go out egypt . mubarak and omar soliman played with peapole alot . they made alot of speeches . which were no benefit . but the god helped the people and made the mubark get out egypt . really every dictator have a bad end . if mubark not be greedy and didnot still in egypt . he did not have this bad end . finally i like to say thanke you my god

in my opinion moubarak is worest prisedent in the history of egypt**and i hope coming a new good prisedent***thank you

انا فى المرحلة الاعدادية و ساكتب بضع اسطر عن الsubmarine the submarine is a good invention .you can go to the bottom of the sea with it ,it is made of hard glass and metal , you can took many photoes for fishes with it ارجو لمن يقرا الموضوع ان يصحح لى الاخطاء ان وجدت و يقول رائيه فى الموضوع مع مراعاة انى طالب فى الصف الثانى الاعدادي

God willing،we will score a very important goal in the current crisis in egypt . concerning the demonstrations in egyptians revolution that began in 25\1 and still exist at moment . i think the egyptian were a very brave serious citizens .they surely wanted to preserve our country and keep it one of the advanced countries in the world and this is our right.isnt it? but they didnt mean that they want that slaughter to be happened . alot of our egyptian brothers were killed by hearts that dont know any mercy sympathy or compassion. how did they do such a cruel murder with their brothers?!. absolutely former president mubarak was their supporter iam sure he was the person who gived them (policemen) these instructions to do such a devilish work towards egypt sons . but however he did we will still insist on having our rights to revive a happy life and we will tell our sons in the future about what our egyptian parents did .. in the end i want to say that iam very proud to be an egpytian girl and iam very :078111rg3:proud of my home EGYPT
accept my passing
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what about coming again ???

choose a topic and we all write in it

عن الفتنه الطائفيه
الفالح يكتب

it's so difficult

you must start

we can try to write in this topic
why not ????

Sectarian strife
It is one of the most serious problems facing our society and must Coptic brothers should know that fires are not due to their churches Muslims but are the remnants of the former regime

الفتنه الطائفيه
انها من اخطر المشاكل التى تواجه مجتمعنا و يجب على الاخوه الاقباط ان يعلموا ان حرائق كنائسهم ليست بسبب المسلمين بل هى من فلول النظام السابق






واضح جدا انى غاشه الموضوع ده من جوجل ترجمه ههههههههههههه
it is so clear that i copy this topic from google translation hhhhhhhhhhh
i will think and write

This a good idea.
I tried it before with my friends and enjoyed it
It is really chanse to improve our English
but we need more words we dont know to get better
Very good sub and idea too :)

find the mistakes if u find it

i read an information in my daily newspaper and it was very important and interesting
nuclear powers production in U.S is controlled by the nuclear regulatory commission
diamonds is evaluated on the basis of their weigh , purity and color
because helicopters are capable of hovering in midair , they are particularly useful for save missions , military operates & transportation

sorry if u find them

God willing،we will score a very important goal in the current crisis in egypt . concerning the demonstrations in egyptians revolution that began in 25\1 and still exist at moment . i think the egyptian were a very brave serious citizens .they surely wanted to preserve our country and keep it one of the advanced countries in the world and this is our right.isnt it? but they didnt mean that they want that slaughter to be happened . alot of our egyptian brothers were killed by hearts that dont know any mercy sympathy or compassion. how did they do such a cruel murder with their brothers?!. absolutely former president mubarak was their supporter iam sure he was the person who gived them (policemen) these instructions to do such a devilish work towards egypt sons . but however he did we will still insist on having our rights to revive a happy life and we will tell our sons in the future about what our egyptian parents did .. in the end i want to say that iam very proud to be an egpytian girl and iam very :078111rg3:proud of my home EGYPT
accept my passing
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ur essay is the best here as the other paragraphs have aloooooooooot of mistakes especially the first one but i have to say that u have 2 mistakes
gived and instructions
no instructions and informations but information and instruction
and its gave not gived
thanks

find the mistakes if u find it

i read an information in my daily newspaper and it was very important and interesting
nuclear powers production in U.S is controlled by the nuclear regulatory commission
diamonds is evaluated on the basis of their weigh , purity and color
because helicopters are capable of hovering in midair , they are particularly useful for save missions , military operates & transportation
i think
1-"information
2-U.S.A/POWER
3-are
4-for saving

sorry if u find them
if u can find them

information
THE U.S / power
are/ weight
for saving / operations
but thank u science for ur answers