الرجاء من الاخوة الزملاء الافاضل و السادة الزوار الكرام ان من يجد جملة او تعبير او اسلوب جميل فى القصة بل ان وجد احد خطا ما بان يضعه داخل هذا الموضوع وبذلك نستطيع تجميع كل ما هو جميل وجديد فى القصة حتى تعم الفائدة وان نال هذا الموضوع اعجاب السادة المشرفين فرجاء ان يتم التثبيت

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He wanted to explain what had happened to his books and his
money.
It was a long journey. When they finally reached the street
where Mr Brownlow lived, Dr Los berne looked at Oliver and
asked, "What's the matter? You look white. Are you feeling
ill?"
Oliver pointed to a sign on the door of Mr Brownlow's
house.
It said "Sold." Mr Brownlow got out of the coach and
asked a neighbour what had happened.
"Mr Brownlow has moved," said the neighbour. "He went to

the West Indies six weeks ago."

I think it must be Dr Losberne instead of Mr Brownlow

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