Second Year Rewrite
1 She's too busy to accept our invitation. ( free )
2The match was cancelled due to the heavy rain . ( that's why )
3 I have never met such a talkative woman. [most]
4 The last time I saw him was a week ago. ( It's )
5 The secretary didn't type the letter until the manager had signed it
( Hardly )
Third Year Rewrite
1.They lost the match although they practiced well . (despite )
2.For traveling around World I should have a lot of money
( so as to)
3.He bought two books only as he did not have enough money . {If}
4.He always has his tea black. {is used}
5.Perhaps she sent him a letter
( He might )
mr_elfiky@yahoo.com

<div align="left">second year rewrite</div>
1) مش محددة اية الكلمة اللى بين الاقواس
2) the rain was heavy that's why the match was canceled
3) she is the most talkative women i have ever met
4) it's week since i have seen him
5) hardly had the manager signed the letter , the secrstary didn't type it



<div align="left">third year rewrite</div>
1) they lost the match despite of thier well practise
2) i should have a lot of money so as to travel around world
3) if he had had enough money he would have bought two books
4) he is used to have his tea black
5) she might have sent him a letter


شكرا لحضرتك على هذا المجهود الرائع اتمنى انك تصححلى حلى وتقوللى دا صح ولا غلط
وتوضح لى الجملة الاولى فى جمل القواعد لسنة تانية



شكرا جزيلا
مع السلامة
:D

ميرسية جدا على الريرايت دة

السلام عليكم,
هذة أول مشاركه لى وأرجوا اّن وجد اى شخص أخطاء ان يخبرنى
<div align="left"><div class='quotetop'>إقتباس</div>She's too busy to accept our invitation. ( free ) [/b]
she isn't free to accept our invitation -\
<div class='quotetop'>إقتباس</div>The match was cancelled due to the heavy rain . ( that's why ) [/b]
it rained heavy that's why the match was cancelled
<div class='quotetop'>إقتباس</div>I have never met such a talkative woman (most)[/b]
she is the most talkative woman i have ever met
<div class='quotetop'>إقتباس</div> The last time I saw him was a week ago. ( It's )[/b]
it's one week since the last time i saw him
<div class='quotetop'>إقتباس</div> The secretary didn't type the letter until the manager had signed it( Hardly )[/b]

The secretary hardly type the letter , the manager had signed it

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الأخ / heshamwhite
(بعد إذن الأخ الفقي)
إجاباتك كلها سليمة باستثناء الأخيرة.. و الصح:

Hardly had the manager signed the letter than the secretary typed it

Thanks Mr Matrix . I do hope you are following my contributions here . Anyhow I'd like to tell you that I wish I could be more positive but our students response not encouraging enough. As for the last Rewrite sentence I think you forgot to mention when with Hardly not than . Briefly , I'm delighted to be in touch with you here . Have blessed Holy Ramadan days .

ثانكس

وانا الحمد الله فهمت الى حد ما

<div class='quotetop'>إقتباس</div>الأخ / heshamwhite
(بعد إذن الأخ الفقي)
إجاباتك كلها سليمة باستثناء الأخيرة.. و الصح:

Hardly had the manager signed the letter than the secretary typed it[/b]
[color=#663300]مش المفروض than مع no sooner
و when مع hardly
زى ما خدنا ولا انا غلطان

<div class='quotetop'>إقتباس(Mr._Alfiky @ Apr 21 2006, 10:32 PM) 99208</div>

Third Year Rewrite

1.They lost the match although they practiced well . (despite )

They lost the match despite practising well

2.For traveling around World I should have a lot of money
( so as to)

I should have a lot of money so as to travel around the world



3.He bought two books only as he did not have enough money . {If}

If he had had enough money , he would have bought more than two books


4.He always has his tea black. {is used}

He is used to having his tea black


5.Perhaps she sent him a letter
( He might )
He might have been sent a letter

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