ممكن اعر فين الخطأ فى الجاملة دى
 

play و ليس playing

طيب وليه مش playing

During لا يليها Gerund وبالتالى غيرها بـ While

حيث أن during يليها أسماء فقط ، أما While فتليها جمل تامة أو gerund فمثلا نقول
He fell during the match / while playing and broke his arm.

while
بدلا من during

While instead of during
great effort from mr elnaggar

Wrong :he broke his arm during playing hockey Correct 1 :he broke his arm during his play hockey Correct 2 :he broke his arm while playing hockey Note the second answer is the model answer. Bye

and we can say it's acceptable if we say : he broke his leg during the hockey playing

I think the sentence is correct. There are no mistakes

أنا ارجح while بدل during

his arm was broken
لاحظ ان الجملة ثبنى للمجهول لان المعنى كسر زراعه

انا فى سنة تانية بس اظن الخطا اما فى :
كلمة during the hocky playing والمفروض الصح during playing the hocky
او : it will be acceptable مكان هف هس شؤؤثحفشلامث
حالة if الاولى

He broke his arm during playing hockey
الجملة الان صحيحة هل لاحظ احد التغيير. الخطأ ليس فى during لانها يأتى بعدها ing , noun ولكن الخطا هنا فى اول الجملة التى لابد وان تكون capital

I think it is a correct sentece , the mistake is in the punctuation .