بوابة الثانوية العامة المصرية - الرجاء ابداء الرأى فى هذه القصيدة

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الاستاذ عوض على

02-06-2013 05:04 PM

الرجاء ابداء الرأى فى هذه القصيدة

قصيده " The End "

now i have to say good bye.
you have to look for another guy.
i feel it easy to die.
than live with you in a lie.
we lived together hand in hand.
no no now i can't stand.
told me,our days you have to remember.
said i ,for me isn't amatter.
now the time came.
i will not stay in this shame.
what abad mood and miserable you bring.
made me see love as abad thing.
now your plot is clear to appeare.
you will not see me again ,i will dissappeare.

الاستاذ عوض على

02-06-2013 05:05 PM

تأليف طالب فى الفرقة الثانية من كلية الآداب جامعة المنصورة

ابومحمدالشناوي

13-06-2013 11:02 AM

Honestly
it's wonderful and subtle

ابومحمدالشناوي

13-06-2013 11:07 AM

slight note
appear, disappear
don't have "e" at the end

Mr_HalEeM

18-06-2013 01:56 AM

great really
he has a wonderful gift

بدر السماء

24-06-2013 12:52 PM

awesome. really it is a wonderful poem

Nasr Fouad

14-08-2015 05:30 PM

very wonderful

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