برجراف عن حرب السادس من اكتوبر
 

دي برجراف بأسلوبي عن حرب اكتوبر
After the defeat of Egypt in 1967 Sinai was occupied by Israelis Egypt started to regain its power and build its army to face its enemy and recover its land_ Sinai_ and President Abdel Naser did his best to get Sinai back but he died before he see Sinai back to her mother Egypt as he dreamed .After that President Elsadat completed the journey
of struggle and he finished the stage of preparation and the implementation was on Friday the tenth of Ramadan and the sixth of October,1973 the Egyption army managed
to beat the Israeli army and get back Sinai and this proves the intelligenc,courage and good planning of the Egyptions.
We are proud to celebrate this occasion every year and we hope that the last glory and greatnessof Egypt.
أرجو من الجميع المشاركة برأيه ولو في حد عندة ملاحظة او تعبيرات احسن يقول

مجهود ممتاز يا اميرة و اتوقع لكى مستقبل مبهر ان شاء اللّه
بس عندى شوية ملاحظاتhe died before he see
he had died before he saw
2- EGYPTIANS
3-INTELLIGENCE
هذا لايقلل من شانك ولا من مستواكى المتميز وتقبلى خالص تحياتى

شكرا يا مستر جواد على الملاحظات واوعدك اني هاهتم بيها لكن انا اكتشفت الاخطاء دي بعد ما حطيت الموضوع وحاولت اصلحها لكن النت فصل

really. it 's amazing vocabulary. thanks.