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[كونان العرب]

السلام عليكم

معلش يا جماعة عندي شوية كوركت مش متأكد منها فياريت حد يأكدلي عليهم و يحللي اللي مش عارفه !!
ومعلش لاني هطول عليكم

1- many people believe teaching is an awarding profession.
هل الغلط في an لان profession لا تعد ؟؟

2- I'd like to help my country by working as a citizen servant
civilian citizen ??

3- he worked as a war sender for a famous TV channel

4- leila wishes she had went with us to the lecture
had gone ولا went من غير had
وليه ؟؟

5- he takes insulin injections as he suffers from sugar
diabetes

6- during photosynthesis , the oxygen is trapped back into the air
come

7- the teacher congratulated to the headmaster about some bad students in his class
complained

8- japan consists of a group of seas
islands

9- the cairo metro is the only underground highway system in africa

10- some naughty pupils may pull weaker ones at school

11- after building the high dam , the nile no way floods its banks
longer

12- how much coffees have you drunk today
many ولا اشيل ال s من coffees

13- the team usually plays very well, so they always win
play و لا it

14- my boss celebrated his first wedding festival at a big hotel
anniversary

15- it's not a suitable accusation to speak to him . he is very angry
الغلطة في اتهام بس نخليها ايه ؟؟

16-decayed fuels such as oil and coal should be replaced by renewable sources
non renewable بدل decayed

17- i have a flower pottery on my balcony
pot

18- streams carry water from the roots to the leaves
sap ولا tubes

19- the film will start soon , if it started , i will record it
would ولا starts

20- it's probable that ali must have sold his car last week. he must have sold it
certain

21- the line from shoubra to monib goes into the nile
under

22- trains carry exactly two million people every day
nearly

23-unusual weather is not a modern phenomenon

it's a good idea to make the underground to the city center

i wish it will stop raining all the time

i caught the train as i couldn't get to the station on time

during an earthquake of the sun, it becomes dark on the earth
eclipse

the magazine has a message about your last film
review

the tunnel under the nile is about 8 metres in length

where on sun do floods occur so quickly
how on earth

some countries depend mainly on rainy water in agriculture

we are happy about your interesting in our book club

in the past , people used to learn folk music from books

his father probably died young as he spent time in prison

my brother is a diplomat at cairo university
research assistant

he is good at making out groundless excuses
up

yesterday a relative of mine met his end and i attended his funeral processor
procession

i met some people from the neighbour village
neighbouring ولا neighbourhood

everest summit is nearly 9000 metres on sea level
above

he wouldn't have gone to the hospital if he hadn't been injuried

وشكرا مقدما

[hazem3]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة كونان العرب

السلام عليكم

معلش يا جماعة عندي شوية كوركت مش متأكد منها فياريت حد يأكدلي عليهم و يحللي اللي مش عارفه !!
ومعلش لاني هطول عليكم

1- many people believe teaching is an awarding profession.
هل الغلط في an لان profession لا تعد ؟؟

بتيألي هتبقى rewarding

2- I'd like to help my country by working as a citizen servant
civilian citizen ??

civil

3- he worked as a war sender for a famous TV channel

reporter

4- leila wishes she had went with us to the lecture
had gone ولا went من غير had
وليه ؟؟
ممكن went

على أساس أنها wishes

وممكن تبقى would

5- he takes insulin injections as he suffers from sugar
diabetes

أظن كده..

6- during photosynthesis , the oxygen is trapped back into the air
come

ممكن given out

7- the teacher congratulated to the headmaster about some bad students in his class
complained


8- japan consists of a group of seas
islands

9- the cairo metro is the only underground highway system in africa

railway

10- some naughty pupils may pull weaker ones at school

bully

11- after building the high dam , the nile no way floods its banks
longer

12- how much coffees have you drunk today
many ولا اشيل ال s من coffees

الأتنين صح..

13- the team usually plays very well, so they always win
play و لا it

يعني أنت لو عملت الأتنين صح بس أنا ميال ل play


14- my boss celebrated his first wedding festival at a big hotel
anniversary

15- it's not a suitable accusation to speak to him . he is very angry
الغلطة في اتهام بس نخليها ايه ؟؟
ممكن situation

16-decayed fuels such as oil and coal should be replaced by renewable sources
non renewable بدل decayed

17- i have a flower pottery on my balcony
pot

18- streams carry water from the roots to the leaves
sap ولا tubes
مش عارف بس خليها tubes عشان منغيرش carry كمان



19- the film will start soon , if it started , i will record it
would ولا starts

starts

20- it's probable that ali must have sold his car last week. he must have sold it
certain

21- the line from shoubra to monib goes into the nile
under

22- trains carry exactly two million people every day
nearly

23-unusual weather is not a modern phenomenon

it's a good idea to make the underground to the city center

ممكن provide أو lengthen

أو expand


i wish it will stop raining all the time

would

i caught the train as i couldn't get to the station on time

missed

during an earthquake of the sun, it becomes dark on the earth
eclipse

the magazine has a message about your last film
review

the tunnel under the nile is about 8 metres in length

diameter
where on sun do floods occur so quickly
how on earth

some countries depend mainly on rainy water in agriculture

rainwater

we are happy about your interesting in our book club

مش عارف ممكن interest

in the past , people used to learn folk music from books

ممكن نشيل books ونحط families >> friends each other>>

أي حاجة غير الكتب لأن الموسيقى مكنتش بتتكتب..

his father probably died young as he spent time in prison
الله أعلم..
my brother is a diplomat at cairo university
research assistant

he is good at making out groundless excuses
up

yesterday a relative of mine met his end and i attended his funeral processor
procession

i met some people from the neighbour village
neighbouring ولا neighbourhood
neighbouring
everest summit is nearly 9000 metres on sea level
above

he wouldn't have gone to the hospital if he hadn't been injuried

مش عارف جملة عجيبة بس ممكن been بدل gone مثلًا؟؟؟
وشكرا مقدما

أتمنى مكنش عكيت..

[روحاء هندسه]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة كونان العرب

السلام عليكم

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

معلش يا جماعة عندي شوية كوركت مش متأكد منها فياريت حد يأكدلي عليهم و يحللي اللي مش عارفه !!
ومعلش لاني هطول عليكم

1- many people believe teaching is an awarding profession.
هل الغلط في an لان profession لا تعد ؟؟

لا انا أتفق مع زميلي حازم في انها a rewarding
لان هو دة المصطلح عندنا في المنهج

2- i'd like to help my country by working as a citizen servant
civilian citizen ??

مش متأكدة بصراحة بس تقريبا زي اما قال زميلي حازم civil

3- he worked as a war sender for a famous tv channel

الجملة غريبه شويه بس رايي correspondent مكان sender

بس مش عارفة ازاي تبقى مع war وايه علاقتها بيها

4- leila wishes she had went with us to the lecture
had gone ولا went من غير had
وليه ؟؟

رايي الاتنين ينفعوا لانه ماحددش

ماحددش انها حاجة في الماضي ولا المضارع وكمان فعل التمني في المضارع وبالتالي الاتنين ينفعوا والله اعلم

5- he takes insulin injections as he suffers from sugar
diabetes

تقريبا نشيل sugar ونحط diabetes

6- during photosynthesis , the oxygen is trapped back into the air
come

ديه مش عارفاها خالص

7- the teacher congratulated to the headmaster about some bad students in his class
complained

هنحط apologised مكان congratulated

8- japan consists of a group of seas
islands

مش متأكدة أوي بس رايي جروب ماتنفعش خالص فرايي تبقى combination مثلا بس حسه برده اللي بعدها مش نافعة فمش عارفه بصراحة

9- the cairo metro is the only underground highway system in africa

هي الغلطة اكيد في highway بس مش متأكدة ومش عارفة لو هي غلط نجيب ايه مكانها

10- some naughty pupils may pull weaker ones at school

ديه هتبقى bully مكان pull وهي كلمة في يونيت اتلغى

11- after building the high dam , the nile no way floods its banks
longer

رايي نجيب no longer بس مش متأكدة

12- how much coffees have you drunk today
many ولا اشيل ال s من coffees

رايي تشيل s بس مش متأكدة

13- the team usually plays very well, so they always win
play و لا it

play لانك لو قلت it يبقى لازم تغير win ل wins وتكون كدة طلعت غلطتين مش غلطة واحده

14- my boss celebrated his first wedding festival at a big hotel
anniversary

مش عارفة ممكن occasion

15- it's not a suitable accusation to speak to him . He is very angry
الغلطة في اتهام بس نخليها ايه ؟؟

عندك حق بس مش عارفة تحديدا ايه

ممكن مثلا behaviour بس مش عارفة ايه العلاقه

16-decayed fuels such as oil and coal should be replaced by renewable sources
non renewable بدل decayed

ممكن بس مش متأكدة الاول يعني ايه decayed؟؟؟

17- i have a flower pottery on my balcony
pot

مش عارفة

18- streams carry water from the roots to the leaves
sap ولا tubes

أعتقد tubes لانك حتى لو حطيت ساب محتاج تغير الفعل وتحط اس عشان مفرد

19- the film will start soon , if it started , i will record it
would ولا starts

starts عشان تتناسب مع الباقي

20- it's probable that ali must have sold his car last week. He must have sold it
certain

أعتقد آه...بس هي الجملة كدة متكررة ولا ايه؟؟؟؟

21- the line from shoubra to monib goes into the nile
under

أعتقد ممكن below او under بس مش متأكدة خالص

22- trains carry exactly two million people every day

nearly

ممكن بس مش متأكدة

23-unusual weather is not a modern phenomenon

مش عارفة ممكن climate

it's a good idea to make the underground to the city center

i wish it will stop raining all the time

رايي would

i caught the train as i couldn't get to the station on time

أعتقد نشيل النفي لان الاستاشن فيها التران بالفعل ....بس مش متأكدة

during an earthquake of the sun, it becomes dark on the earth
eclipse

تمام

the magazine has a message about your last film
review

ممكن بس مش عارفة...

the tunnel under the nile is about 8 metres in length

مش عارفة مش شايفه فيها غلط

where on sun do floods occur so quickly
how on earth

تمام بس كدة شلت غلطتين وبالتالي الجملة المفروض تكون مش كدة...بس ديه هي الاجابه الوحيدة من رايي

some countries depend mainly on rainy water in agriculture

رايي rainfall لان rainy صفه بمعنى ممطر

we are happy about your interesting in our book club

interest

in the past , people used to learn folk music from books

مش عارفه

his father probably died young as he spent time in prison

غريبه الجملة ديه

مش عارفه

my brother is a diplomat at cairo university
research assistant

ممكن professor

بس مش متأكدة خالص

he is good at making out groundless excuses
up

من رايي تمام

yesterday a relative of mine met his end and i attended his funeral processor
procession

تمام بس مش متأكدة

i met some people from the neighbour village
neighbouring ولا neighbourhood

neighbourhood

everest summit is nearly 9000 metres on sea level
above

أعتقد تمام

he wouldn't have gone to the hospital if he hadn't been injuried

نشيل the

لانه رايح المستشفى لنفس الغرض اللي خصصت ليه

وشكرا مقدما

دة رايي والله أعلم

وأتمنى مستر يجاوب أفضل

وبجد جمل جميله

شكرا

[روحاء هندسه]

بعد القراءة للمرة التانيه أتفق معاك في 6 و14 بس مش متأكدة اوي

[كونان العرب]

جزيتم خيرا
وياريت لو فيه اي مدرس يدخل يساعد ><"

[polat]

6 released

[polat]

15 الافضل occasion

[hazem3]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة polat

6 released

فعلًا أفضل من given out

15 الافضل occasion

ممكن.. بس شايف أنه situation ممكن تكون كويسة برضه..

[روحاء هندسه]

أنا سألت المستر بتاعي وهغير الاجابات اللي هو قالها فقط لكن الباقي يبقى زي اما انا قلت ف الاول


اوك؟؟

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة كونان العرب

السلام عليكم

معلش يا جماعة عندي شوية كوركت مش متأكد منها فياريت حد يأكدلي عليهم و يحللي اللي مش عارفه !!
ومعلش لاني هطول عليكم

1- many people believe teaching is an awarding profession.
هل الغلط في an لان profession لا تعد ؟؟

2- i'd like to help my country by working as a citizen servant
civilian citizen ??

3- he worked as a war sender for a famous tv channel

4- leila wishes she had went with us to the lecture
had gone ولا went من غير had
وليه ؟؟

5- he takes insulin injections as he suffers from sugar
diabetes

6- during photosynthesis , the oxygen is trapped back into the air
come


المستر قال released

7- the teacher congratulated to the headmaster about some bad students in his class
complained

8- japan consists of a group of seas
islands


المستر قال برده كدة زي اجابتك يعني

9- the cairo metro is the only underground highway system in africa


railway زي اجابة زميلي حازم

10- some naughty pupils may pull weaker ones at school

11- after building the high dam , the nile no way floods its banks
longer

12- how much coffees have you drunk today
many ولا اشيل ال s من coffees

13- the team usually plays very well, so they always win
play و لا it

14- my boss celebrated his first wedding festival at a big hotel
anniversary


المستر رايه ان الجملة تمشي كدة صح عادي

15- it's not a suitable accusation to speak to him . He is very angry
الغلطة في اتهام بس نخليها ايه ؟؟


occasion

16-decayed fuels such as oil and coal should be replaced by renewable sources
non renewable بدل decayed

fossil

17- i have a flower pottery on my balcony
pot

المستر قال نفس اجابتك

18- streams carry water from the roots to the leaves
sap ولا tubes

19- the film will start soon , if it started , i will record it
would ولا starts

20- it's probable that ali must have sold his car last week. He must have sold it
certain

21- the line from shoubra to monib goes into the nile
under


تمام

22- trains carry exactly two million people every day
nearly


المستر رايه مش غلط اوي بس قال تعدلها لزي اجابتك برده

23-unusual weather is not a modern phenomenon


نشيل النفي

it's a good idea to make the underground to the city center

المستر رايه ان مفيهاش غلط

سواء make او expand رايه الاتنين صح

i wish it will stop raining all the time

i caught the train as i couldn't get to the station on time

during an earthquake of the sun, it becomes dark on the earth
eclipse

the magazine has a message about your last film
review


report مكان مسج

the tunnel under the nile is about 8 metres in length

المستر قاللي ممكن تبقى صح عادي

where on sun do floods occur so quickly
how on earth

some countries depend mainly on rainy water in agriculture

rain


we are happy about your interesting in our book club

in the past , people used to learn folk music from books


ديه معلومة ثقافيه مالهاش لازمة والمستر قال people مكان بوك

his father probably died young as he spent time in prison

حط his قبل تايم بس ديه مش مقتنعة بيها اوي

my brother is a diplomat at cairo university
research assistant

he is good at making out groundless excuses
up

yesterday a relative of mine met his end and i attended his funeral processor
procession

i met some people from the neighbour village
neighbouring ولا neighbourhood

everest summit is nearly 9000 metres on sea level
above


المستر قال at بس برده مش مقتنعة اوي

مقتنعة باجابتك اكتر

بس هو قال الاتنين مايفرقوش

he wouldn't have gone to the hospital if he hadn't been injuried

وشكرا مقدما

[روحاء هندسه]

انا برده معاك زميلي حازم رايي انها ممكن تكون ستيواشن بس تقريبا عشان بس نجيب لفظة من عندنا في المنهج نختار أوكاشن

[hazem3]

the tunnel under the nile is about 8 metres in length

المستر قاللي ممكن تبقى صح عادي

هي صح قواعديًا يعني..

بس ده هيبقى ترعة أو بركة مية كده اللي تحتها نفق طوله 8 متر مش النيل خالص يعني..

يعني هو بقية الإجابات في حاجات برضه مش جاية معايا.. هابقى آجي أقولها..

[روحاء هندسه]

لا هو بيتكلم عن العرض يعني مش قطره

بصراحة مش عارفه أوي

بس انا في البدايه كنت حسه مافيهاش حاجة لكن لما حضرتك قلت دياميتر حسيت انها ممكن كدة

فبصراحة مش عارفه


بس عادي النفق بيكون ليه عرض برده


مش قطر بس

[hazem3]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة روحاء هندسه

لا هو بيتكلم عن العرض يعني مش قطره

بصراحة مش عارفه أوي

بس انا في البدايه كنت حسه مافيهاش حاجة لكن لما حضرتك قلت دياميتر حسيت انها ممكن كدة

فبصراحة مش عارفه


بس عادي النفق بيكون ليه عرض برده


مش قطر بس

ما هو لو عرض هيبقى width
مش length
بس عامة مفيش اختلاف

في رعاية الله..

[روحاء هندسه]

اوك معلش اتلخبطت


قصدي طول


والنفق اكيد ليه طول يعني


كأنه يعني أسطوانة هيكون ليه قاعدة وهي الدايرة وطول اللي هو ارتفاعه

بس رايي مش منطقه خلاف اوي

وشكرا

[hamadagamed]

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