عزيزى الطالب تعالى و أدخل و اسأل و افهم مع درس خصوصى

[Ayman M.Ebrahim]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ahmed ali12345

طيب معلش علملى البراجراف التانى بتاع 2011 وارجووك تقولى لو بتصحح ااخد كام علشان اطمن بس

how to share in the progress of our country

fancy holding my pen to write about this important topic ! Wow ! I am sure that everyone will tackle it from a different angle, but i will focus on the main points. Our country is one of the most beautiful countries all over the world.every one should do his (their) best to make egypt a better place. Many people ask,how to share in the progress of our country?.first, we have to encourage tourism by handling the tourists like(as) our friends.second, the sellers shouldn`t exploit the tourists.third,the mass medias play a vital role in the advance of egypt,so they should show good models of the egyption people to encourage others to be better.fourth, the government should care about it`s (its) scientists and reward them for their efforts to encourage them to do their best to make egypt the most advanced country all over the would.fifth, scientists should make new inventions .sixth, students should study well and do their best to be scientists,doctors,engineers and good models for egyption people . We should encourage industry ,exporting and reducing importing.i hope egypt to be better than any time before.finally, i'd like to point out that what i have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean.

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