اجابه برجرافات دليل التقويم (الموضوع الاول)

[مستر/ عصام الجاويش]

ان شاء الله ساحاول تقديم مجموعه من موضوعات البراجراف والخطابات الموجوده فى دليل التقويم كلما سنحت الفرصه

Charitable Organizations

No one can deny that charitable organizations play a very important role in all countries of the world. It is known that there are a lot of people who live in abject poverty. Those people are in bad need of those who lend them a hand to lead a decent life. It goes without saying that charitable organizations do an excellent job when they collect money from rich people and give it to those who are in dire need of it. They sometimes ask humanitarian teachers to give the poor students private lessons for free. They may provide them with clothes and food. There are also medical charitable organizations which help a large number of poor patients. Some of the best doctors treat the needy free of charge.
It is our duty to help charitable organizations by all possible means as they contribute greatly to relieving the pains of poor people and draw a smile on their lips. In this way, they open the door of hope before them and make them feel that they are not alone in this world.

[wagdy222]

رائع يامستر عظيم و اكير من ان نقول ذلك

[مستر/ عصام الجاويش]

بارك الله فيك
واتمنى لو هناك اى ملاحظات ان تذكروها لانى كتبت البرجراف بدون مراجعه

[diaanandiaanan]

دى يرجرفات و خطابات كتبتها ممكن تفيد
لانى فكرت الفكرة دى
جزاك الله خبر

Atomic power

There are many kinds of energy. There are solar, anomic and nuclear energy. The wind and the water are another two kinds. Atomic power can be good or evil according to the way it is used. If it is used in medical research and scientific experiments, it is good. If it is used to kill and destroy in wars, it is evil. Many agreements called for preventing producing atomic weapons. We can use atomic energy instead of electricity. If a country refused to join this agreement, the others should punish it. They can stop dealing with this country. We should do our best to improve atomic power and direct nations to make the best use of it. One of its disadvantages is atomic waste. It caused damage to the animals and the people when they live near its landfill. That’s why, no government should accept that atomic waste bury in its land.

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Olympic Games

Games and sports have great effect on all people all over the world. They can make peace prevail. One of the most important sports competitions worldwide is the Olympic Games. It takes place every 4 years. At first it was part of a religious festival for amateurs only. Although the athletes don’t pay, their countries train them well and spend much money to prepare them. Winning the Olympic Games is a great honour. It helps greatly in the world peace. It makes the people from all over the world mix together. People from all over the world enjoy watching it. It makes the cultures meet and contact. It encourages people to do a sport instead of watching it. To sum up, Olympic Games isn’t fair today.

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Air travel

Since air travel began, the world became a small village. It has many advantages and disadvantages. One of its advantages is that it helps us to travel fast. It is also comfortable. It saves time and effort. It is now safer and faster than before. There is much entertainment on planes like hot meals, watching movies and drinks. Air travel makes trading easier and faster. We can transport goods all over the world in a few hours. On the other hand, it has many disadvantages. One of which, it costs much money. It is also frightening to some people. Many dangerous accidents may happen and they are fatal مميت. Planes might arrive late if the weather is bad. That’s why, it is a mixed blessing. To sum up, We can't do without air travel in our modern world.

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The effects of pollution on modern live

There are many problems that threaten man's life on the earth. Pollution is one of the most dangerous problems that face man nowadays. There are different kinds of pollution such as air pollution, water pollution and noise. There are many causes of pollution. One of which is car fumes, factories waste, atomic waste and factories smoke and modern vehicles. To solve this problem, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in rivers or in the streets as they cause illness. Drivers shouldn’t use their horns without reason or drive cars without an urgent reason. We should grow trees and plants everywhere as they give us shade, oxygen and make the nature more beautiful. Plants are the lungs which we breathe with. If we don’t find solutions to this serious problem, our life on earth will be destroyed. To sum up, all nations all over the world must cooperate to face it.

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Money (10)

Before money was invented, people used many ways to trade. For example, they used barter مقايضة system. They also used other objects as money such as shells. Inventing money is a breakthrough in the human history. It is either coins or banknotes. Every country has its own currency. There is probably one currency for a group of countries like Euro. Money is a mixed blessing. It is good or evil according to the way we used it. It should be means for living, not an end. It is used to buy goods, food, clothes, shelter and medicine. It also can be used to do huge projects, make inventions and experiments which benefit humans. On the other hand, it was the cause of many crimes and wars as people are greedy. They want more than they need. The rich should help the poor so as not to feel hatred towards them. Rich countries must help the poor ones.

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Best (411)

25Orabi St,

Luxor,

Egypt.

13th may

Dear Morad,

I'm happy to write this letter to you. How are things? I hope you are well when you receive this letter.

I want to apply for a job in one of the summer camps. It needs special qualities such as cooperation, leadership, discipline and self-reliance. I hope they will accept me in this job as it is very interesting and enjoyable. I can visit many exciting places and do great activities.

Write soon with your news

Best wishes

Yours, Maher

The place where I live

Some people like living in the country, others like living in the city. I live in a village. Living in a village has advantages and disadvantages. Low prices are one of the advantages of living in a village. Another advantage is that it is very quiet and clean. There aren’t many vehicles, so there less air and hearing pollution. In a village I can see beautiful landscapes and views. There wide green areas which help me to relax and ******* myself. In a village all people know each other well, so if anything bad happed to one of them, the others rush to help. On the other hand, Living in a village has some disadvantages. There are very few places of entrainment to spend my free time. I can hardly find any job to do during the summer vacation. There are no facilities تسهيلات. Most of my needs are done in the city next to my village. This wastes my time and wears me down. However, I like living in a village.

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Charitable organizations (10)

There are many kinds of organizations in the society such as scientific organizations, educational organizations, environmental organizations, political organizations and charitable organizations. Charitable organizations play an important role in our world. They collect money to help the poor. Some of them are national and local while others are international. Local charitable organizations take care of people inside one country. They collect donations تبرعات to help the poor lead a happy and comfortable life. International organizations means rich nations should help poor ones. There are different ways to do that. Rich nations can give the poor food, money, medicine and clothes. If a country is opposed to a catastrophe such as an earthquake or a storm, the others should provide it with not only medical aid but also with the human element العنصر البشرى such as doctors, nurses, experts, trained army soldiers.

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15 20 Mansura St,

Cairo,

Egypt.

15th April

Dear John,

I'm happy to write this letter to you. How are you? I hope you are in a good health when you receive this letter. My family sends their best regards to you.

Have you heard about what is happening in Gaza strip? If you haven’t. Let me tell you. The Israeli Soldiers attacked the unarmed poor people there. They are killing and slaughtering them with no right. They kill the children, women and the old alike. The people there are without food, home or clothes. The whole world must cooperate to find solutions to save these poor people from destruction.

Write with your opinion

Best wishes

Yours Ahmed Ali

[Mr. Medhat Salah]

thaaaaaaaaanks alot

[Mr Abo Ammar]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة diaanandiaanan

دى يرجرفات و خطابات كتبتها ممكن تفيد
لانى فكرت الفكرة دى
جزاك الله خبر

atomic power

there are many kinds of energy. There are solar, anomic and nuclear energy. The wind and the water are another two kinds. Atomic power can be good or evil according to the way it is used. If it is used in medical research and scientific experiments, it is good. If it is used to kill and destroy in wars, it is evil. Many agreements called for preventing producing atomic weapons. We can use atomic energy instead of electricity. If a country refused to join this agreement, the others should punish it. They can stop dealing with this country. We should do our best to improve atomic power and direct nations to make the best use of it. One of its disadvantages is atomic waste. It caused damage to the animals and the people when they live near its landfill. that’s why, no government should accept that atomic waste bury in its land.

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olympic games

games and sports have great effect on all people all over the world. They can make peace prevail. One of the most important sports competitions worldwide is the olympic games. It takes place every 4 years. At first it was part of a religious festival for amateurs only. Although the athletes don’t pay, their countries train them well and spend much money to prepare them. Winning the olympic games is a great honour. It helps greatly in the world peace. It makes the people from all over the world mix together. People from all over the world enjoy watching it. It makes the cultures meet and contact. It encourages people to do a sport instead of watching it. To sum up, olympic games isn’t fair today.

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air travel

since air travel began, the world became a small village. It has many advantages and disadvantages. One of its advantages is that it helps us to travel fast. It is also comfortable. It saves time and effort. It is now safer and faster than before. There is much entertainment on planes like hot meals, watching movies and drinks. Air travel makes trading easier and faster. We can transport goods all over the world in a few hours. On the other hand, it has many disadvantages. One of which, it costs much money. It is also frightening to some people. Many dangerous accidents may happen and they are fatal مميت. Planes might arrive late if the weather is bad. That’s why, it is a mixed blessing. to sum up, we can't do without air travel in our modern world.

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the effects of pollution on modern live

there are many problems that threaten man's life on the earth. Pollution is one of the most dangerous problems that face man nowadays. There are different kinds of pollution such as air pollution, water pollution and noise. There are many causes of pollution. One of which is car fumes, factories waste, atomic waste and factories smoke and modern vehicles. To solve this problem, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in rivers or in the streets as they cause illness. Drivers shouldn’t use their horns without reason or drive cars without an urgent reason. We should grow trees and plants everywhere as they give us shade, oxygen and make the nature more beautiful. Plants are the lungs which we breathe with. If we don’t find solutions to this serious problem, our life on earth will be destroyed. To sum up, all nations all over the world must cooperate to face it.

=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-==-=--=-========-==--=-==-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--==-=-=-==-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=

money (10)

before money was invented, people used many ways to trade. For example, they used barter مقايضة system. They also used other objects as money such as shells. Inventing money is a breakthrough in the human history. It is either coins or banknotes. Every country has its own currency. There is probably one currency for a group of countries like euro. Money is a mixed blessing. It is good or evil according to the way we used it. It should be means for living, not an end. It is used to buy goods, food, clothes, shelter and medicine. It also can be used to do huge projects, make inventions and experiments which benefit humans. On the other hand, it was the cause of many crimes and wars as people are greedy. They want more than they need. The rich should help the poor so as not to feel hatred towards them. Rich countries must help the poor ones.

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best (411)

25orabi st,

luxor,

egypt.

13th may

dear morad,

i'm happy to write this letter to you. How are things? I hope you are well when you receive this letter.

i want to apply for a job in one of the summer camps. It needs special qualities such as cooperation, leadership, discipline and self-reliance. I hope they will accept me in this job as it is very interesting and enjoyable. I can visit many exciting places and do great activities.

write soon with your news

best wishes

yours, maher

the place where i live

some people like living in the country, others like living in the city. I live in a village. Living in a village has advantages and disadvantages. Low prices are one of the advantages of living in a village. Another advantage is that it is very quiet and clean. There aren’t many vehicles, so there less air and hearing pollution. In a village i can see beautiful landscapes and views. There wide green areas which help me to relax and ******* myself. In a village all people know each other well, so if anything bad happed to one of them, the others rush to help. On the other hand, living in a village has some disadvantages. There are very few places of entrainment to spend my free time. I can hardly find any job to do during the summer vacation. There are no facilities تسهيلات. Most of my needs are done in the city next to my village. This wastes my time and wears me down. However, i like living in a village.

================================================== ========================

charitable organizations (10)

there are many kinds of organizations in the society such as scientific organizations, educational organizations, environmental organizations, political organizations and charitable organizations. Charitable organizations play an important role in our world. They collect money to help the poor. Some of them are national and local while others are international. Local charitable organizations take care of people inside one country. They collect donations تبرعات to help the poor lead a happy and comfortable life. International organizations means rich nations should help poor ones. There are different ways to do that. Rich nations can give the poor food, money, medicine and clothes. If a country is opposed to a catastrophe such as an earthquake or a storm, the others should provide it with not only medical aid but also with the human element العنصر البشرى such as doctors, nurses, experts, trained army soldiers.

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15 20 mansura st,

cairo,

egypt.

15th april

dear john,

i'm happy to write this letter to you. How are you? I hope you are in a good health when you receive this letter. My family sends their best regards to you.

have you heard about what is happening in gaza strip? If you haven’t. Let me tell you. The israeli soldiers attacked the unarmed poor people there. They are killing and slaughtering them with no right. They kill the children, women and the old alike. The people there are without food, home or clothes. The whole world must cooperate to find solutions to save these poor people from destruction.

write with your opinion

best wishes

yours ahmed ali

أولا ألف شكر للأستاذ عصام

ولكن لا يوجد عنوان أو تاريخ للخطاب في مواصفات الإمتحان بالنسبة لهذه المشاركة

[The Ocean]

The idea is really great. The paragraph itself is easy to understand and to be remembered by students. God bless you. i.

[APIDO]

ربنا يخليك و يدخللك الجنة ألهم امين يا مستر عصام حضرتك و كل المدرسين بالمنتدى , يا ريت يا مستر حضرتك تكتب كل البراجرفات لو سمحت عشان انا ضايع فيهم اللى هم ف النماذج ... و شكرا

[مستر/ عصام الجاويش]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة apido

ربنا يخليك و يدخللك الجنة ألهم امين يا مستر عصام حضرتك و كل المدرسين بالمنتدى , يا ريت يا مستر حضرتك تكتب كل البراجرفات لو سمحت عشان انا ضايع فيهم اللى هم ف النماذج ... و شكرا

ان شاء الله ربنا يعيننا على كتابتهم ومن يريد ان يساهم معى فى كتابه موضوعات دليل التقويم يتفضل بوضعها هنا لكن ارجو عدم وضع موضوعات خارج الموجود فى دليل التقويم

[elsayed2]

عملاقنا المتواضع استاذ عصــــــــــام

نشكـــــــــــــــــــــرك لمشـــــــــــاركة طلابــــــــك موضوعـــــــــــــات التعبير والرســـــائل وربنا يعينــــــك وأجمل ما قررته

هو المبادرة لطــــرح موضـوعات دليل التقويم فى ال Pargraphs and letters

فلك وللأخــــــــــــوة المشـــــاركين كل الحب والتقديـــــــــــــــــــــر على هذا المعروف

[km3]

ياريت اجابة قطع الدليل اصلها غريبة خالص

[SA3EEDY]

Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks

[سها نور]

من فضلك يا مستر كنت عايزه برجراف عن الموبيل المحمول

[التائبة الى ربها]

Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks

[عاطف القاضى]

Great work.Well done