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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة S.p.e.C.i.a.L
Sh2awa thank you very much
you have wonderful feelings
you're so kind
but i think the rhythm is not adequate one,
rhythm in English Poetry is not so
but after all
your words are so nice,so light and i liked it
read more in English poetry you'll do better
thank you again
accept my criticism
i want you do better
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noooooooo ttanx my honey u r so welcome
tanx for ur words