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![]() Sh2awa thank you very much
you have wonderful feelings you're so kind but i think the rhythm is not adequate one, rhythm in English Poetry is not so but after all your words are so nice,so light and i liked it read more in English poetry you'll do better thank you again accept my criticism i want you do better |
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