ممكن اعر فين الخطأ فى الجاملة دى

[omar2eg]

he broke his arm during playing hockey

[mzbh1973]

play و ليس playing

[omar2eg]

طيب وليه مش playing

[Mohamed Ibrahim Shady]

During لا يليها Gerund وبالتالى غيرها بـ While

حيث أن during يليها أسماء فقط ، أما While فتليها جمل تامة أو gerund فمثلا نقول
He fell during the match / while playing and broke his arm.

[حنان منصورعيد]

while
بدلا من during

[Gamal Elnaggar]

he broke his arm during playing hockey
من المكن ان نقول he broke his arm during the hockey match
او he broke his arm while playing hockey

[محمد فليفل]

While instead of during
great effort from mr elnaggar

[Eng.ABDO2015]

Wrong :he broke his arm during playing hockey Correct 1 :he broke his arm during his play hockey Correct 2 :he broke his arm while playing hockey Note the second answer is the model answer. Bye

[أحمد رأفت عزالدين حسن]

and we can say it's acceptable if we say : he broke his leg during the hockey playing

[العقل المدبر]

I think the sentence is correct. There are no mistakes

[Ahmedbeezzz]

أنا ارجح while بدل during

[ahmed alaraby]

his arm was broken
لاحظ ان الجملة ثبنى للمجهول لان المعنى كسر زراعه

[aly19]

انا فى سنة تانية بس اظن الخطا اما فى :
كلمة during the hocky playing والمفروض الصح during playing the hocky
او : it will be acceptable مكان هف هس شؤؤثحفشلامث
حالة if الاولى

[mr.alielmaghraby]

He broke his arm during playing hockey
الجملة الان صحيحة هل لاحظ احد التغيير. الخطأ ليس فى during لانها يأتى بعدها ing , noun ولكن الخطا هنا فى اول الجملة التى لابد وان تكون capital

[عمران جابر مهني]

I think it is a correct sentece , the mistake is in the punctuation .