كلام X كلام !!!

[S.p.e.C.i.a.L]

Sh2awa thank you very much
you have wonderful feelings
you're so kind
but i think the rhythm is not adequate one,
rhythm in English Poetry is not so

but after all
your words are so nice,so light and i liked it
read more in English poetry you'll do better

thank you again
accept my criticism
i want you do better

[sh2awa _ 91]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة S.p.e.C.i.a.L

Sh2awa thank you very much
you have wonderful feelings
you're so kind
but i think the rhythm is not adequate one,
rhythm in English Poetry is not so

but after all
your words are so nice,so light and i liked it
read more in English poetry you'll do better

thank you again
accept my criticism
i want you do better

noooooooo ttanx my honey u r so welcome
tanx for ur words