ممكن تساعدونى فى تصحيح البرجراف ده

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة adham_592005

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم
احييك على هذا ال Paragragh
لكن به عدد من الاخطاء منها ما يمكن ان نتجاوز عنه ومنها الخطأ الفادح (لاحظ الالوان)
وممكن ان يكون كالتالى:

In fact the most important person in my life is my mother. She is agood example to me . She taught me alot of values such as courage, unselfishness, self confidence. She always advises me to decide on my goal and try to achieve it. Although she usually meets alot of difficulties, she has time to help me. She always encourages me to be better. She takes much care of me. Indeed, I am proud of her. I admire her very much. The end

شكرا لك يا مستر (بجد فى اخطاء هبله اوى انا غلط فيها)