دفعه ثانويه عامه 2015

[Physician future]

حلو التصحيح دة
it is a similar film that this channel showed last year
hamid only sees his friend Ahmed very occasion
he does regular visits to his village
بقولكم ايه البراجراف دة كتبته فى 10 دقايق تدونى عليه ام بصراحه ان شايفه انه وحش
A good leader
No one can deny that we all need a good leader to our country. A good leader can improve our economic
conditions.when i said that we need a good leader you think i will talk about the president.but i mean
agood leader at all works we want a good leader to our children to be good citizens like him .teachers at school are leader to their student.
but we should ask our selves about the quality we need for our leader. we should choose a leader who
deserves our votes. he should be brave honest patient and optimistic. to sum up.we need a good leader to lead a better life because he is only way to progress
انتهى البراجراف ارجو التصيح والتقييم من سيا دتكم كانت معكم سندس لبيب

[Mohamed_Hamza]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة $طالبة علم$

حلو التصحيح دة
it is a similar film that this channel showed last year
hamid only sees his friend Ahmed very occasion
he does regular visits to his village
بقولكم ايه البراجراف دة كتبته فى 10 دقايق تدونى عليه ام بصراحه ان شايفه انه وحش
A good leader
No one can deny that we all need a good leader to our country. A good leader can improve our economic
conditions.when i said that we need a good leader you think i will talk about the president.but i mean
agood leader at all works we want a good leader to our children to be good citizens like him .teachers at school are leader to their student.
but we should ask our selves about the quality we need for our leader. we should choose a leader who
deserves our votes. he should be brave honest patient and optimistic. to sum up.we need a good leader to lead a better life because he is only way to progress
انتهى البراجراف ارجو التصيح والتقييم من سيا دتكم كانت معكم سندس لبيب

A good leader
No one can deny that we all need a good leader to (for) our country. A good leader can improve our economic
conditions.when i said that we need a good leader you think i will talk about the president.but i mean
agood leader at all works (In all fields) we want a good leader to(of) our children to be good citizens like him .teachers at school are leader(s) to(of) their students(.
but we should ask our selves(ourselves) about the quality we need for our leader. we should choose a leader who
deserves our votes. he should be brave , honest , patient and optimistic. to sum up.we need a good leader to lead a better life because he is only(the only) way to progress

دي كانت ملاحظاتي على الجرامر أو بعض الكلمات الي حاسس انها ممكن تكون احسن في مكانها زي fields مكان works مثلا وحرف الجر الي قبلها ، أما الكلام نفسه كويس (كويس على 10 دقايق يعني)
بس مثلا جملة زي دي he is only way to progress مش موافق عليها أوى يعني في الحقيقة هوا مش الطريق الوحيد للتقدم . المهم تقييمي 7/10 . بس عاااش .. استمرري