ممكن مساعده بالله عليكم

[سوسو و]

السلام عليكم
انا محتاجة مقدمة ونهايه اى براجراف
وازاى اكتبه كويس واجيب فيه الدرجه النهاءيه

[lovely-girl5100]

منصحكيش بأنك تحفظي مقدمة وخاتمة لأنها مش هتنفع لكل المواضيع
حسب نوع الموضوع هتقدري بنفسك تألفي مقدمة صغيرة وخاتمة

مثلا لو موضوع عن اجهزة او اختراع ( كمبيوتر - تلفزيون - موبايل ...الخ )
هنقول

in the recent years We have seen a lot of achievements and inventions that could help the man to move forward in his life.
One of these inventions that we can not live without is ........
........has become an important part of human life. It is used at any place in companies, in schools and at home


وتتكلمي شوية عن استخدامات الاختراع حسب نوعه

In spite of these advantages and the many benefits of ...... There are some disadvantages such as

تتكلمي عن العيوب وطبعا كل اختراع ليه عيوب
معينة

In the end we must use carefully ....... and we should use it in the useful things that will improve our lives and our society also we should avoid and move away from the bad effects of it so as not to turn from a blessing into a curse

دا باختصار وانتي تقدري تتطولي اكتر بس اعتقد كفاية كده دول اكتر من 80 كلمة وطبعا لسة ما اتكلمناش عن مميزاته وعيوب الاختراع بكده هنوصل لأكتر من 100 كلمه


ان شاء الله هكملك باقي الموضوعات المهمة
كل يوم هكتب عن نوع معين

[سوسو و]

شكرا جدااااااااااااااا
بجد جزاك الله كل خير

[lovely-girl5100]

عذرا على التأخير النموذج التاني هنزله حالا

[lovely-girl5100]

اذا كان الموضوع عن مشكلة في المجتمع ( البطالة و الارهاب و غلاء الاسعار و .....)
هنقول

I don’t know where to begin because this matter occupied my attention as it is one of the most serious problems which threatens our life

There is no doubt that the problem of ………… doesn’t bring happiness and development to our society , and we all admit that this problem has many bad effects on us and it may bring all the evil to our society

There is no problem come from nothing it has many reasons and the most important

reason of the problem of ………. Is.................

( ونقول اهم سبب للمشكلة وبختلف حسب نوع المشكلة )

Also there are many reasons for it like

…………..( ونتكلم عن بعض الاسباب الفرعية للمشكلة )

This problem has many harmful and bad effects on all of us and on our society as the problem of …………..
will affect both the individual and the society

for the individual it will affect them badly as

..............

نكتب الاضرار بالنسبة للفرد) )
As for the society

............( نكتب الاضرار وتأثير المشكلة على للمجتمع )

Having known this bad effects we have to put an end to the problem of ………….and look for solutions to eliminate this problem and we will not do that without the cooperation of individuals with government
the individuals should

.............................( نكتب دور الافراد )
The government must do its best to reduce this problem by doing many of the research on this problem and study the causes and how to eliminate them it also should

…….........…

( نكتب دور الحكومة للحد من المشكلة )

In the end, we wish that we can eliminate the problem of

…………

Because solving this problem will help as to live a safe life and to achieve prosperity and

welfare .



المشكلة

البطالة unemployment

اسبابها

(over population as thousands of youth graduate every year from schools and universities but they remain without jobs) دا طبعا السبب الرئيسي

and the adoption of man on the machines and modern technology which caused the lack of employment opportunitiesسبب اخر

اثارها

على الفرد
it may make some people feel with
pressure and dissatisfaction

and this can lead them to suicide or it will make them look for dangerous ways to earn money like spoilage and robbing

or trading with drugs they also can be criminals and drug addiction and this will threaten the security of other people

المجتمع

)) a lot of problems will spread in the society like corruption terrorism , deviation and all kind of crimes , ))

الحل

دور الفرد

Businessmen must participate in setting up projects to provide job opportunities .

الحكومة

Government should encourage the youth to go to the desert and reclaim it , they also should help

them by lending them loans

to start their own
projects

[mahmoud592]

انا من رأيي اننا احيانا مبنعرفش نكتب حاجه عن موضوع معين وفي الحالة دي اعتقد ان المقدمه مفيدة